Naruto Becomes a Demon to Spite His Family Fanfic

But Naruto knew he could not abandon the girl. The sight of those white optics looking at him, filled with fright, but besides with a blink of promise, haunted him. She trusted him, he was the only promise she had

Chapter ane: The Incident

When a immature Naruto saves Hinata from being kidnapped by the village of Kumogakure, the Hyūga clan takes him in as their honoured guest. Raised under their roof, he feels a pull towards the legacy of his clan and fights for his dream to get Hokage, and though he faces numerous obstacles, he has faithful friends that stand past his side.

At least that is the full general idea behind Ziltoid's (who may or may non exist The Magnificent) The Honoured Guest , a comprehensive rewrite of the Naruto serial. It is extraordinarily well-written with the goal of correcting several elements of the original story that left a bad gustation in the author's rima oris. Among these are a focus on the Hyūga and Uzumaki clans, a darker, less idealistic take on the shinobi globe, and well-congenital romances. As of September 10th, 2019, it is completed.

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This fanfic provides examples of the following tropes:

• Adaptational Badass:
  • As is fairly typical for rewrites centered on tweaking the story, Naruto is a practiced bargain more skilled than in the original story, having mastered fūton and katon, begun utilizing raiton, can summon toads, and he's also on his mode to becoming a fūinjutsu master. His use of shadow clones is also more effective. In addition, dissimilar in canon, Naruto has a fire immunity and an affinity for said element thanks to Kurama. It's revealed during the search for Tsunade that he knows how to utilize the Hiraishin.
  • Hinata is besides somewhat more skilled with her mother having her sign the Hyūga clan's summoning contract with Suzaku.
  • Karin learns Fuinjutsu from Naruto.
• Adaptational Early on Appearance: Gamaken, Danzo, Samui, Yugito, Karui, Omoi, Sasori, Karin, Mei, Chojuro, Tsurigi (the Kiri hunter-nin) and Yamato.
• Adaptational Intelligence: Not only is Naruto NOT a deadlast at the Academy, he's also smart enough to be able to learn Fūinjutsu on his own if Jiraiya is unable to teach him.
• Adaptational Jerkass:
  • Sasuke is mode more obnoxious here than in canon.
  • Neji is somehow fifty-fifty worse than he was in catechism, despite the fact that Hizashi wasn't killed as a result of the Hyūga Affair.
• Adaptational Villainy: It's revealed that Hizashi has been conspiring with Orochimaru and the Hidden Sound to kidnap Hinata during the Konoha Trounce and probable has been in league with Danzo.
• Adaptation Personality Change: Naruto hither is far more than subdued and reserved than his cheerful and boastful canon self.
• Adaptation Relationship Overhaul:
  • In canon, Naruto and Karin hardly interact with 1 some other. Here, they form a sibling-esque human relationship when the latter is revealed to be an Uzumaki.
  • Speaking of whom, Karin isn't shown to have a crush on Sasuke in this fic. Based on their first interaction in this fic, it seems like she doesn't similar him much.
• Age Lift: Sort of. Hinata'due south kidnap endeavour happens when she's six rather than three.
• Ever Second Best: Tenten believes that her Fūinjutsu skills are inferior to Naruto's.
• Ascended Extra:
  • In canon, Hinata'southward female parent is a nameless woman who appears once in a flashback. Here, she'south a major character and i of the reasons why Naruto was allowed to be the invitee of the Hyūga.
  • A couple of interesting examples come up in the class of Danzo, who is shown to exist a clear danger almost out of the gate; and Karin, who appeared briefly in the chūnin exams in catechism and then disappeared until Part 2, but here she becomes a major character and Naruto's sister effigy later it is discovered she is descended from the Uzumaki clan.
  • And a more than recent development is Tayuya surviving the Sasuke Retrieval Arc and beingness adopted every bit an Uzumaki.
• Badass Bookworm: An advanced knowledge of the complicated art of fūinjutsu makes Naruto this.
• Beta Couple: Kiba and Karin.
• Large Sis Instinct: While they're not siblings past blood, Yugito sees Naruto and Gaara as her younger brothers. As such, she does not have Sasori's intent on taking them well.
• Cleaved Pedestal: Dissimilar in canon, when Naruto learns that the 4th Hokage is his father, he stops respecting the human and refuses to admit him as his begetter due to the fact that he sealed the Kyūbi in him.
• Calling Parents by Their Name: Ino briefly does this towards her mom to show how infuriated she is at the lies she's been told about Naruto.
• Constantly Curious: Ino in regards to Naruto. She'southward very determined to know more virtually him and his antisocial behavior only fuels her involvement in him.
• The Corrupter:
  • Kurama more so than in catechism.
  • Danzō manages to brand Sakura join his side after the Sand-Audio Invasion.
• Demoted to Extra: Mizuki, despite having one major role discounting filler, had a Modest Role, Big Impact status due to his manipulation of Naruto resulting in the Uzumaki learning non just why he's disliked past nearly of Konoha but also the Shadow Clone Technique. But hither, Naruto knew both reasons by the time he graduated
• Dies Differently in Adaptation
  • In canon, Sasori met his end past the combined forces of Sakura and Chiyo. Here, not only does he dice three years earlier, but too Yugito Nii is his killer.
  • Ukon is killed by Kakashi instead of Kiba.
• Hands Forgiven: Averted. Naruto does not forgive Minato when he learns about the truth nearly the night he was born and their relationship.
• Fantastic Racism: The Honoured Invitee treats the prejudice towards Jinchuriki, Naruto in particular, more seriously than catechism. It gets to the point where information technology has an affect on Naruto'southward psyche.
• Field Promotion: Discussed. When deciding which Konoha Genin will get Chūnin, Hiruzen notes that Naruto's actions during the Sand-Audio Invasion make him qualify for one if he isn't beingness promoted based on his performance during the Exams.
• For Want of a Nail:
  • The story is set in motion when Naruto becomes involved in the attempted kidnapping of Hinata by Kumo. The result is him being accustomed by the Hyuuga clan as the titular "honoured invitee".
  • A secondary nail is afterward revealed explaining why Naruto has more power than in canon, only likewise why the Nine Tails can exert a greater influence on him: When Minato performed the sealing, he was unable to consummate it, with the implication that "Madara" came back for round 2.
• Foreshadowing: In chapter 5, Naruto fabricated a comment about switching teams with Neji. In chapter 9, he and Shino would really switch places.
• Generation Xerox: Jiraiya mused that based on how Tsunade, Kushina, and Naruto act, stubbornness is an innate trait amongst those descended from the Uzumaki Clan.
• Hero with Bad Publicity

• Hidden Depths: According to Kakashi, despite his eccentricities, Guy is very secretive almost his grooming methods and that he allowed Naruto to take office in his preparation is not done out of their rivalry.
• I Am Not Left-Handed: Later on graduation, it becomes increasingly clear to Sasuke and Sakura that Naruto has been holding back during their University years.
• In Spite of a Nail:
  • Naruto is initially placed on Team Kakashi with Sakura and Sasuke despite not being a deadlast, though this is due to Kurama having a bigger influence on Naruto.
  • Team 7 takes the Wave Mission.
  • Naruto still learns the Shadow Clone jutsu and how to summon the Toads.
  • Hinata and Neji fight confronting each other during the Chūnin Exams preliminaries, with the latter winning.
  • Neji and Naruto fight against each other during the Chūnin Exams finals, with the latter winning.
  • Both Jiraiya and Naruto track down and successfully bring Tsunade dorsum to Konoha.
  • The Konona Shell more than or less happens, the finish result being a failure.
  • Hiruzen uses the Dead Demon Consuming Seal, admitting using it to fix Naruto's seal as opposed to using it to take away Orochimaru's utilise of arms.
  • Shikamaru is promoted to Chūnin.
  • Sasuke defects to Orochimaru and in that location was a failed endeavor to call back him.
  • Naruto leaves Konoha for two years for a training trip.
• Killed By The Adaptation:
  • Choji and Shino die during the Sasuke Retrieval arc.
  • Kabuto dies during the Sand-Sound invasion.
• Laser-Guided Karma: When Sasuke tried to set on Naruto, Naruto chose to fight back out of self-defence force. While admitting information technology'due south lenient all things considered, Kakashi punishes Sasuke by restricting him to practise D-Rank missions merely and excluding him from any form of promotion for the foreseeable time to come since he tried to set on a fellow Konoha nin, who also happens to exist his superior in terms of rank.
• Living Weapon: According to Orochinaru, the Kusanagi Tsurigi "only obeys the victor".
• Named past the Accommodation:
  • Hinata'due south mother is given the proper noun Hitomi in this story.
  • Ino's mother is given the name Yuriko here.
• Papa Wolf: Jiraiya hither takes his status equally Naruto's godfather more seriously than in canon, as he'southward been regularly contacting the boy and has been preparation him whenever he's in boondocks since he (Naruto) was 5. Not only that, but Jiraiya besides puts in the attempt of treating Naruto equally a human existence and as the Kyūbi'due south prisoner instead of the creature itself.
• Prongs of Poseidon: The Uzumaki Clan's Bequeathed Weapon, the Gekihoko, takes the course of a trident.
• Spared by the Adaptation:
  • Haku and Zabuza don't get killed during the Moving ridge Mission.
  • Tayuya isn't killed off during the Sasuke Retrieval Arc.
• Stalker Without a Crush: Ino spends a good corporeality of her free time during her Academy years watching Naruto and trying to sympathize him.
• What the Hell, Hero?: In chapter 49, Kakashi chews Sasuke out for trying to assail Naruto.
• Y'all're Non My Male parent: Unlike in canon, Naruto straight up dislikes Minato for sealing the Kyubi into him, and that was before he learned of their familial connexion. When Hiruzen did told Naruto that Minato is his begetter, the male child straight up disowned him.

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